Talk:Marbas/@comment-6402758-20130210060823

Sam E. David's Fucking Crit:WELL. This looks promising. Nice design. This happens to be my favorite color mind you. You did a good job on the descript'. Not many character's have that type of info on their page. Something seems missing here. It is almost as if there is a piece of  her story missing,like there is more to be said here. Your word choice is impeccable. Makes me sound like a 4th grader.I would like to see more artwork involving this character. If there is, can you link me to it? Good job though in terms of story, bits seem clich'e. Most of sverse oc's nearly have the same story: family dies etc. I can see how this defines aspects of the character. I would like to see where this goes.

David Emerson

WoW enthusiast, zelda fanboy, writer